Thursday, March 18, 2010

Wave Zilla

One day I went to the beach with my cousin James and Kalie and my brother Daniel. There we saw a brown pelican fishing for food. He would circle around and then dive at the fish. It was sort of funny to watch him. Brown pelican are rare. We found lots of beautiful shells. We walked down the beach and found a place that had really big waves. So James and I went in the water, we swam around a bit then wave zilla came. This was a huge wave that rolled us over about twice. We did this for a long time and got lots of sand in our swimsuits. It was a really fun afternoon.

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  1. Excellent writing Olivia! There was good structure, good detail and you grabbed the readers attention. Well done.

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