Sunday, March 14, 2010
MY Birthday party
At my birthday party on Saturday i had a lot fun. We did swimming and we went on a water slide and i ate a lot of food. I also shared a birthday party with my friend Faye who was 9 on Saturday. Almost all of my friends were at the party. But my most favourite part of the day was opening my presents.
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Sounds like a very fun day! Good structure to your writing. Remember to capitalize "I" as you are an important person!
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