Thursday, November 26, 2009

What I Did For Thanksgiving.

Today I went to the beach for thanksgiving. And a lot of my Dad's friends came too. We setup the food and everything other than that. And after that we played football for a while. Then we all ate. I ate four pieces of steak! After we all ate we swam for a while but when we were swimming it started to rain so in a while we all went home and I went to bed.
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  1. Miss HurstFriday, November 27, 2009

    Sounds like a fun day!
    You wrote using a good sequence of events.
    Next time, work on your sentence structure, trying not to start a sentence with 'and'.

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