Tuesday, November 10, 2009

What I did on sunday

On Sunday it was raining at my house and my house had so many puddles that my brother and my babe cousin Jase and my aunt Shanna and my cousin josh were playing in the puddles so much that we got so tired and when we got tired we went to my aunt Shanna's house and when we got to my aunt Shanna's house we went in my aunt Shanna's pool Josh and my brother and me played ball in the pooland that is all.THE END

2 comments:

  1. Sounds like a fun day and you sequenced the events correctly. Remember to use punctutation to seperate your sentences.

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