Monday, October 5, 2009

What I did on Friday

Friday I went to my dad's shop and played with my cute sister named Kate.My mother and my aunt was also with me.My dad is always on the computer and makes me go on the computer at night.But,only if I need to do my lesson because he doesn't want me to go on Cartoon Network.
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  1. Miss HurstMonday, October 05, 2009

    You have given some good detail about what you did on Friday. Remember to use correct tense - "was" should be "were".

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