Monday, October 26, 2009

what I did today

My Dad was here I had fun with him he went to My aunt s' work place I saw aunt and I saw a lady that miss hust I know and her name was taneya. have a great night
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2 comments:

  1. olivia zimmerMonday, October 26, 2009

    I think that the story was good but you need to break it down in more sentences. Keep up the work.

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  2. Jessica STuesday, October 27, 2009

    Shennell,
    That was a good story it was nice that you visted that place but to me some of the sentences didnt make sence and remember it is what i thick ok.And keep up the work Bye.

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