Monday, October 5, 2009

A ham shark

  1. Once upon a time a ham shark ate 600 hundred hams and then the ham shark blew up and the ham shark exploded on a island and then the island was cover with ham and water people were so so happy that they blew up to.

4 comments:

  1. Funny and imaginative story! Try to work on your sentence structure and remember to finish each sentence with a full stop.

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  2. I like that you made up the whole story. Next time make a true story.

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  3. I like it and it was very fun.But next time make sure what your what your doing.

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