max called out don't push the button or we will go back in time to the dinosuors
so superman push the button and max said what have you done superman
max and superman started to fight and Max has won and they landed in
front of a mother tranasuros rex and the tranosuros rex swallowed them up
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John when you write Max you use a capital letter and you could use a full stop after each sentence.
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Nice John.But M should be a capital letter.And make sure you use a period or a full stop at the end of any paragraph.
ReplyDeleteI like your story.I also like the name rex and max.
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