Once there was a crazy Dog. so every day it always dirty up the house so Fast. there ways dishis on the Floor. so the Crazy Dog pops on the floor, also pes on the floor and fights big Dogs. the Crazy dog always wins. so the crazy dog was the king of fighting .
the end.
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It is great that the dog is the king of plus you ther not many peirods and there are some wrong spellings.
ReplyDeletejohn mabye you nead to write about your holaday and your mom.
ReplyDeleteI like the story I also like the title. Next time you should ask someone how to spell a word put capitle letters in the beginiing
ReplyDeleteThe story was very funny . But I think that next
ReplyDeletetime you should work on making the sentences
longer. Other then that the story was grate!