Wednesday, June 23, 2010

ASTRO BOY.

once a boy named Toby Toby loved robots and his dad created robots but one day he made the peace maker but there was two Cors to turn on the peace maker and the red was a bad choice so Toby sneaked in to the chamber and when every one left the chamber and the peacemaker explode and the dad made ASTRO BOY THE END

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  3. You should probly add a coma between Toby and Toby and capilize o in once.But good job

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