Friday was my brother's birthday. He was 18. We got him a delicious cake!
On Saturday my cousins came to my house and we went in the pool we did handstands
and played games. We ate coconuts that tasted amazing. Today I went to church and
sang on the praise team. After church we went to my grandmother's house for lunch. After lunch I came home and did my homework.
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I liked that you wrote about your brother's birthday. You wrote lots of good detail. Next time you could focus on using more punctuation.
ReplyDeleteyour story is cool you did a good story i bet it was fun your brothers bithday he is so tenages. i think you shold not say the chuch praise team becuase you all ready told that to the class.
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